His Story (a rap? lol)

Um, so I was just writing a poem on the spot, and I think it turned into a rap.  lol....I'm not sure it's that good because I've never written a rap before.....so, forgive my lack of ghetto-ness, lol.  I ain't no gangsta.  ;)  

Loving God is not a game
Playing with God is not the same
As giving Him your wounded heart
You say you know Him,
 Guess that's a start...
But knowing Him is so much more
Than gaining knowledge
In twenty-four
Books of the Bible.
Can't you see?
Right relationship
Will set us free
From all our all our bondage,
All our chains.
Yet you still think
That He's a pain.
He gives us freedom,
Gives us life
But you can't get over
All the strife
The enemy puts inside you head.
Don't you want to have Him
instead?
Why this waiting?
Why this anger?
Why do you treat Him
Like a stranger?
He's your Friend
He's your Brother
He only requires
No Other Lovers.
But you still sit
In your grief
You complain,
And whine
This is such a crime
Against God Almighty
Who lets you breathe.
Without Him you're dead.
Can't you see?
What'll it cost?
What's it gonna take
For you to stop being stupid
And put your stake
In the ground
And be found
In Yeshua, our Lord
And take the sword
Of His Word
Before you're burned.
He's the Lord
The Lord of lords.
He's coming back
and He won't take you back
if you lack
the stack
of crack
down of your lack
now.
You better fight the fight
And be known for your flight
from he who devours all your might
just like a kite
with no wind beneath it's wings
You better submit
He's the king.
Let me hear you sing
"Holy
Holy
Holy
Lord God of Glory"
You gotta get in with His Story.
So don't be dumb
Get real
Get right
Why you always
puttin' up a fight?
To those who love you
an' wanna see you grow?
I think it's time you listen
To the wishin'
Of those around you
Who care about you
Cause, fo real, what we say it true.
That's why we say
Holy
Holy
Holy
Is the Lord God of Glory
Quick, before you can't get in His Story...